Monday, March 22, 2010

The Hand, a thriller

A freshly severed hand on a dark dresser top (an elegant dresser, carved and solid). Silent drip drip drip, red blood on the carpet, drip drip drip...

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It's the near future, in a stem cell lab. Corporate, not the academic type.

Elmira Ramirez, Chief Scientist, marches down the long tile hall. Resounding click of high heels echoes
fluorescent lights.
Rats in cages, caged rooms.
(barbed wire at the guard station outside)

Progress.
ACCIDENT and she didn't make headlines because
it was taboo, a secret because
she was killing someone else in the struggle
a rival scientist? a jealous sister? pick one but the important part is that, in the struggle,
slice
ACCIDENT and
Chief Scientist implores,
Save that hand!
But it's gone (THAT HAND IS GONE)

Buried that hand with the body, but no hand is evidence too.
Where'd you lose that hand, Elmira?

Later, late night.
Awake in lab (glow) goggles.
frenzy
test tubes, petri dish, scalpel
and grafting with a scalpel
the latest unreleased secret- the "Re-Gens"- and

New hand takes seed.

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The new hand is not quite right.
something sinister
over time- evil
the new hand and the other hand begin to oppose one another until
the hands-off (hand vs. hand)
approaches mania.

A struggle!
The hand becomes destructive
Racing scene ensues:

In Elmira's house (urgency)
She staggers through the door (rocking on its hinge, left open)
snowy outside chill
night time air

to the bedroom
-low lights
dark mahogany and
cream plush carpets (white)

Battle Battle one hand has a
large knife!
(grabbed it in the kitchen, on the way in)

She is able to knock it away (Elmira, with the other hand)
it falls on the bed
Hours and Hours.... she fights

STANDING
arms apart, held with all
her strength
tension
persperation

the sunlight is starting to
creep over the snow horizon out the window.
it makes a tiny line on the wall and

Elmira stands as the sun rises
holding out
holding out
holding out

Final image:
A severed hand
at the wrist
bones and nerves stick out
laying on the hard
mahogony
camoflauge
next to the hairbrush
jewelery box
drip drip is silent, to the floor
enveloped by the plush carpet,
it's silent.
snow comes in the front door.

Elmira is gone.
The sun is up.

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